12.3 Feedback

Let's get critical. Not feedbacking everyone, well not intending to anyway. But Abel did ask me so he gets priority. As you can see, I'm not doing this in hopes of garnering feedback. But if I do ask one day, I would appreciate it. Anyway, with that said let's get to work.


Abel: First up, this wasn't as confusing as your offering vs. Striker, so that's a plus. Started off decently with Abel encountering another conflict. From there the mood of the promo dropped with Abel playing 'playboy' or whatever it was, decent scene but something I probably could have gone without. Your attempts at match relevance, I feel it fell flat and it came off like a passing mention. Part three became rather interesting with your business dealings with Romeo. Overall, it seems to really set up some interesting promos to come and I hope to see you follow up with that. The promo itself was solidly written, had some hiccups in dialogue but overall a fine offering. I'm not going to say anything about match relevance, but do know that neither you, or Drew for that matter, really did a good job of convincing me to pick you, which is what I look for above all else in terms of voting and/or rating. I only went with Drew because what he had to say came off a tad more intriguing. Either way, good promo.

Leviticus:

Plz? As someone who gets to read both sides your opinion is highly valued.

It would be much appreciated to hear your opinion Mr. RCA! May you please drop some feedback my way