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PostSubject: Mikes big bad feedback thread   Tue Aug 14, 2012 4:00 pm

Nicholas Gray: I heard someone say you were bored is that true? lol. not bad given what you gave yourself to work with. I am just getting back so I don't really know where storylines are but who doesn't enjoy a little "jobber smash"? anyway the writing quality is decent but you can totally put out better stuff. I've seen it. work a little harder next time.

Antonio G. : I like where you are going. We haven't really had a mute since X was around these parts and it looks like you are going to take this character in a completely new direction which i Like. I got a bit of a foley "have a nice day" vibe from this that i don't know was intentional but i Liked it. Keep up the good work.

Prideman: Really liked this dude. Am gonna have to go back and read again it after I smoke lol. Enjoyed your pacing and verbiage. Also one of the more seamless of lyrics in a promo I have seen. Here is hoping somehow i come out on top of you and jack. .... No homo

Brooks: Short and to the point. Not sure what this is leading toward but I am intrigued.

Mark: Dude I love me a good origin story. This was a solid way of reintroducing yourself and as always I am a fan of yours. The style and flow are great and I am excited to see where you take this.


Jensen: Much much improved from what i am used to seeing from you. You as a bro works beautifully and it is a unique arc around these parts which is refreshing. that being said i think this type of setup would work much better as a segment than as a promo. If you can find a way to use this idea in a narrative form I think you could be on to something.


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PostSubject: Re: Mikes big bad feedback thread   Tue Aug 14, 2012 4:37 pm

I'll work hard when this jobber smash (which isn't a little since it's been this whole cycle :/) is over. But it is ending this show, so better stuff will be put out.

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PostSubject: Re: Mikes big bad feedback thread   Tue Aug 14, 2012 5:05 pm

Nicholas Gray wrote:
I'll work hard when this jobber smash (which isn't a little since it's been this whole cycle :/) is over. But it is ending this show, so better stuff will be put out.



its all good. wasnt trying to be overly critical I have just seen what you put out before is all. I understand the frustration though
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PostSubject: Re: Mikes big bad feedback thread   Tue Aug 14, 2012 7:09 pm

Really cool to get some positive feedback. I felt really good about this promo, being rather new to this I feel like I'm starting to hit my stride. I honestly hope it leads to a win as Prideman could do with it!
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PostSubject: Re: Mikes big bad feedback thread   Tue Aug 14, 2012 7:26 pm

Loins wrote:
Really cool to get some positive feedback. I felt really good about this promo, being rather new to this I feel like I'm starting to hit my stride. I honestly hope it leads to a win as Prideman could do with it!

you ever want feedback just hit me up. before or after its posted doesnt matter.
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PostSubject: Re: Mikes big bad feedback thread   Wed Aug 15, 2012 4:47 am

Feedbacks? Plz?

You can find it in the Amm V&P thread where Levi posted it for me. Been awhile since I have done something like this so feedback would be much appreciated.
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PostSubject: Re: Mikes big bad feedback thread   Fri Aug 24, 2012 2:03 pm

^^^Excellent.
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