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PostSubject: The Dude Abides... With Feedbax   Wed Jan 12, 2011 12:41 pm

Right then, who wants some feedback?

Jeff Whitt: It's well written and I liked it. I liked the ending because it revealed that Gold Standard wrestling is actually making money instead of losing it, but Williams was winding them up in order to make yet more money. The coding and spelling all seem correct as well, it's really annoying reading a promo with chunks of code missing or really bad spelling mistakes. Kudos for not doing that.

Storm: It was ok. Nothing really special or attention grabbing but I liked the way you described the scenery, especially in the intro when he is writing the letter. Possibly come up with a more intresting concept next time though.

Axel: I liked it but it was a bit short, but then again so was mine so who am I to talk. Also, maybe too much colouring and the coding is kind of confusing. It makes the thing sort difficult to read. Maybe try use more of a script writing approach like I use.

Drew: Bloody long lol. I really dug the red intro and outro. A real snapshot into Drew's mind and what he thinks about going into this match. This promo reads more like a book than most of the shit I've read before, bloody good effort. I also really dug the ending with Skylers family. It was pretty fitting, and a good end that Skyler himself would probably appreciate.


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PostSubject: Re: The Dude Abides... With Feedbax   Wed Jan 12, 2011 12:47 pm

I do! I do! Pick me! Ohh, please pick me!

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PostSubject: Re: The Dude Abides... With Feedbax   Wed Jan 12, 2011 1:03 pm

Done dude.
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PostSubject: Re: The Dude Abides... With Feedbax   Wed Jan 12, 2011 6:27 pm

Me want feedback.

*looks at the dude with puppy eyes*
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PostSubject: Re: The Dude Abides... With Feedbax   Wed Jan 12, 2011 7:25 pm

Hey trey hook your boy up?? Thanks !!!
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PostSubject: Re: The Dude Abides... With Feedbax   Thu Jan 13, 2011 10:45 am

Updated dudes!
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PostSubject: Re: The Dude Abides... With Feedbax   Thu Jan 13, 2011 10:53 am

Like with Abel's, I'm just going to stroll in here and slyly toss my name in for feedback and such.
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PostSubject: Re: The Dude Abides... With Feedbax   Thu Jan 13, 2011 10:55 am

If you really want to post some feedback I would be willing to throw some your way

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PostSubject: Re: The Dude Abides... With Feedbax   Thu Jan 13, 2011 11:08 am

Bit O' feedback for you there Drew.
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PostSubject: Re: The Dude Abides... With Feedbax   Thu Jan 13, 2011 2:16 pm

Thanks for your thoughts bud. I use coloring to differentiate who is speaking but sometimes it can get a bit outrageous. I think I will try the script approach next time. I have something up my sleeve for Axel's next appearance too...I think y'all will dig it.
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PostSubject: Re: The Dude Abides... With Feedbax   Sat Jan 15, 2011 12:22 pm

Sign me up sir
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