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PostSubject: Lethal feeback with an Injection of Steele   Fri Apr 09, 2010 2:32 am

I don't think I will have time to feedback as many people as normal but I will do my best so those who particularly want my feedback please let me know and I will try to do those first. Otherwise I will just work through until I get sick of it.

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Pros: This promo had a really good flow to it. There were not any parts where I found myself having to go back and reread because I missed something, it just worked Your descriptions were once again of high standard.

Cons: Because it flowed so well it read really short. I felt like I just got into it and it was over, now that's not necessarily a bad thing because it's good to finish wanting more. But in this case I felt like you could have given a little more for a title match.
The speech directed at Drew at the end for me was probably the weakest part, it was just pretty predictable and didn't add anything.

FROST

Pros: As per normal you craft your words carefully and cleverly so I won't bother talking about that. The back and forth between Frost and his mate was probably my favourite part.

There were a couple of chuckle moments... the phone suriving and the concern for the rifle were both funny.

Cons: To be totally honest I wasn't a big fan of this promo. Now I am not a big fan of the subject material which no doubt has some influence over my opinion. I thought some of the story moved insanely fast. I found it hard to buy Carter admitting to people he only just met that he is a werewolf after what must have been only 5 minutes of conversation.

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PostSubject: Re: Lethal feeback with an Injection of Steele   Fri Apr 09, 2010 2:33 am

you know I'm always up for your insights steele
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PostSubject: Re: Lethal feeback with an Injection of Steele   Fri Apr 09, 2010 6:12 am

I'd like some feedback if at all possible. My promo is a bit long so don't feel like you gotta.
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PostSubject: Re: Lethal feeback with an Injection of Steele   Fri Apr 09, 2010 6:51 am

I would also like some of your feedback.

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PostSubject: Re: Lethal feeback with an Injection of Steele   Fri Apr 09, 2010 7:32 am

Me Me Me

I would enjoy your opinion

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PostSubject: Re: Lethal feeback with an Injection of Steele   Fri Apr 09, 2010 7:58 am

Hannibal Frost wrote:
I'd like some feedback if at all possible. My promo is a bit long so don't feel like you gotta.

Well mine is rather long too so feedbax me too and we'll call it square ?? Wink
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PostSubject: Re: Lethal feeback with an Injection of Steele   Fri Apr 09, 2010 11:45 am

I would love some feedback if that were to be at all possible, please.
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PostSubject: Re: Lethal feeback with an Injection of Steele   Tue Apr 13, 2010 5:12 pm

the feedback is a lie

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PostSubject: Re: Lethal feeback with an Injection of Steele   Thu Apr 15, 2010 1:24 am

If you're still open, I'd appreciate some feedback.
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