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PostSubject: Re: Promo Feedback Requests   Mon Feb 15, 2010 9:53 am

Any and all feedback would be appreciated.
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PostSubject: Re: Promo Feedback Requests   Mon Feb 15, 2010 1:33 pm

I'd also like some feedback. Anyone who does, i'll do the same.
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PostSubject: Re: Promo Feedback Requests   Mon Feb 15, 2010 2:49 pm

Lazyking wrote:
I'd also like some feedback. Anyone who does, i'll do the same.

I personally enjoyed your promo greatly. I like the dynamic between your character and the brother, its coming along very nicely. And I do like the jumping back and forth between present and past though it gets a lil confusing. I am trying to figure out a way to do that myself without it looking like utter shit. All in all a good job at 10.2 bud!
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PostSubject: Re: Promo Feedback Requests   Mon Feb 15, 2010 3:38 pm

Feedback would be appreciated plz?
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PostSubject: Re: Promo Feedback Requests   Mon Feb 15, 2010 4:36 pm

If anyone would like to give me feedback, then please do. Also if anyone wants any feedback from me ... well just ask. I'm all moved in now (as of an hour ago) so I'll have some time to give some if asked.
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PostSubject: Re: Promo Feedback Requests   Mon Mar 08, 2010 4:09 pm

Feedback would be appreciated.
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PostSubject: Re: Promo Feedback Requests   Mon Mar 08, 2010 4:59 pm

I should get around to it by tomorrow or the day after. I've read it, but haven't given it the indepth read through yet.
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PostSubject: Re: Promo Feedback Requests   Mon Mar 08, 2010 7:53 pm

New promo is up Smile

Any feedback for anyone would, as usual, be gratefully received and of course I will endeavor to give feedback to those who ask.


Why the heck did I go all posh and polite? lol


I've make a few changes so now you could give me a bit of feedback. Very Happy


Last edited by Doublemummy on Tue Mar 09, 2010 2:08 pm; edited 2 times in total
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PostSubject: Re: Promo Feedback Requests   Tue Mar 09, 2010 6:35 am

My first Feedback thread in a long time should be up tomorrow, hoping to have around 10-12 promos feedback'd before the end of the weekend.

I'd love some feedback on my own promo and of course if give you will receive. I'll be feedbacking the first few promos regardless and concentrating really on those people who are newer and who I think feedback could add something to there game.

I was never comfortable feedbacking people who I believed where better than me.
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PostSubject: Re: Promo Feedback Requests   Fri Mar 12, 2010 1:24 pm

Hi. Would like some feedback plz, specifically Abel/Sy-Sy/Clarke if you guys have spots free! Very Happy

-Skyler
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PostSubject: Re: Promo Feedback Requests   Fri Mar 12, 2010 1:46 pm

Done.
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PostSubject: Re: Promo Feedback Requests   Fri Mar 12, 2010 2:55 pm

Skyler Striker wrote:
Hi. Would like some feedback plz, specifically Abel/Sy-Sy/Clarke if you guys have spots free! Very Happy

-Skyler

For you....

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I'll fit you in after Steele. Should be up tomorrow at some stage...but for now. DRINKING!!!!
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PostSubject: Re: Promo Feedback Requests   Mon Mar 15, 2010 6:35 am

I know its late, but could I have some feedback please, I know I was late, but I want to hear what was good and bad in it, if possible.

thanks, oh and I'll AIM or PM anyone who feedbacks me, thats a promise.

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PostSubject: Re: Promo Feedback Requests   Mon Mar 15, 2010 7:01 am

I'll Feedback you mate, I do plan of finishing my Feedback too. Only to does people who request it though, I won't have time to feedback everybody.
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PostSubject: Re: Promo Feedback Requests   Mon Mar 15, 2010 7:04 am

You sir are one awesome gentleman, if you were on AIM right now I'd give you some feedback, but it saddens me to see you nowhere in sight...

You didn't lose the AIM details again did you?

Haha, anyway, however you want it, you'll get it.


(Oh and this kinda sounds wrong so ABSOLUTELY NO HOMO)

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PostSubject: Re: Promo Feedback Requests   Mon Mar 15, 2010 7:44 am

I've managed to give feedback to almost everyone who promo'd only the few late comers to do. They should be up by later tonight so please check out the "A Bird's Eye View" thread to see what I've said about you all.
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PostSubject: Re: Promo Feedback Requests   Mon Mar 15, 2010 10:43 am

Skyler Striker wrote:
Hi. Would like some feedback plz, specifically Abel/Sy-Sy/Clarke if you guys have spots free! Very Happy

Leon Caprice wrote:
I know its late, but could I have some feedback please, I know I was late, but I want to hear what was good and bad in it, if possible.

thanks, oh and I'll AIM or PM anyone who feedbacks me, thats a promise.

Updated... for my fellow West Australians

Aso, I reckon I have 2 more left in me so first to ask will get it
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PostSubject: Re: Promo Feedback Requests   Mon Apr 05, 2010 7:48 am

I personally think my promo's are getting better but please any and all feedback would be hugely appreciated ... I'll be working on my Lethal Injection version of Bird's Eye View as soon as my migraine gones away (chocolate overdose induced me thinks).
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PostSubject: Re: Promo Feedback Requests   Thu Apr 08, 2010 9:39 pm

Ok guys this is my first promo here in a style quite different than im used to so any advice would be greatly appreciated. Thanx
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PostSubject: Re: Promo Feedback Requests   Thu Apr 08, 2010 9:58 pm

Just dropped mine.

Have at it.
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PostSubject: Re: Promo Feedback Requests   Fri Apr 09, 2010 1:51 pm

Promo up. Different from the norm this time, something I tried out. Feedback would be great.
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PostSubject: Re: Promo Feedback Requests   Sat May 15, 2010 12:41 pm

I'd like to make an appeal to the Feedback Gods for a little bit of thought on my re-debut promo.

Minus the lack of match relevance, I know I didn't put much in.

But yeah, I could really use whatever help anyone is willing to give me. I am personally less than pleased with the promo, but that's mainly because I just am not use to writing AO anymore and it may take me a round or two to get back into the swing of it.
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PostSubject: Re: Promo Feedback Requests   Sat May 15, 2010 9:43 pm

So, like,

I've got this idea, right.

And, not knowing when it is I'm going to get a chance to write, so, I thought I'd do a little something anyway. First of all, it creeped me the fuck out doing it. It was 1am and fukken dark here when I started, so, that may explain that.

Anyway.

With no real direction or target to go in, I'm almost certain that this isn't my best work in the world, but for those who've never read any of what I've done, it's an introduction to you.

For those who have, well, it's a re-introduction.

Iunno. I want to see if I can still do creepy/cool.

Anyway, feedback would be appreciated, and most definately returned. And here's a link to the post itself.

http://fullmetalwrestling.forumotion.com/shows-f11/fmw-111-trash-talking-thread-t400-180.htm#14931

I'm actually quite nervous about this. =3
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PostSubject: Re: Promo Feedback Requests   Sat May 15, 2010 10:00 pm

Quick thing Dunn (and I only say this cuz I got my ass chewed out about this very same thing last month) could you resize those photos so we don't have to stretch the screen and scroll over. It really brings the page together to have everything included in the same space.
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PostSubject: Re: Promo Feedback Requests   Sat May 15, 2010 10:29 pm

... It stretches your screen?
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PostSubject: Re: Promo Feedback Requests   Sat May 15, 2010 11:14 pm

It stretches the window the forum opens in. Notice how the rest of the forums all fill one screen with only a scroll bar for up and down...? That's what I'm talking about. Just resize the pictures or if you can't, find different ones that are smaller.

It's much appreciated.
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PostSubject: Re: Promo Feedback Requests   Sat May 15, 2010 11:18 pm

The pictures work fine for me.
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PostSubject: Re: Promo Feedback Requests   Sat May 15, 2010 11:29 pm

I know Clarke is planning to give me some feedback, but I would also like some feedback if you guys have time. Thank you in advance.
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PostSubject: Re: Promo Feedback Requests   Sun Jun 13, 2010 9:11 pm

Want to buy.
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PostSubject: Re: Promo Feedback Requests   Thu Jun 17, 2010 7:23 pm

I would like feedback on my Comeback promo
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