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PostSubject: Promo Feedback Requests   Mon Jan 11, 2010 9:56 am

I'm not sure if I'm supposed to do this but there was no topic thread for this. I'm requesting feedback on my promo for 10.1.
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PostSubject: Re: Promo Feedback Requests   Mon Jan 11, 2010 11:14 am

I wouldn't mind a word or two on mine....I have been so buzy fending off crap from the entire fed in the trash talking thread I think I may have gone a little weak...
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PostSubject: Re: Promo Feedback Requests   Mon Jan 11, 2010 12:21 pm

To be fair it's mainly me, and if you don't like it you could always back down Very Happy

Also, I will try to feedback who I can, no promises, but I will do what I can in my spare time.
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PostSubject: Re: Promo Feedback Requests   Mon Jan 11, 2010 5:49 pm

Axel_Van_Osbourne wrote:
I wouldn't mind a word or two on mine....I have been so buzy fending off crap from the entire fed in the trash talking thread I think I may have gone a little weak...

This is just my opinion, but I felt like you could have talked more about the 80s training montage part of your promo. To me, that kind of funny stuff is what would define Axel Van Osbourne...but you just sort of skimmed over it.

Just my thoughts. Good promo though.
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PostSubject: Re: Promo Feedback Requests   Mon Jan 11, 2010 7:07 pm

I would like some 10.1 feedback.
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PostSubject: Re: Promo Feedback Requests   Mon Jan 11, 2010 10:51 pm

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Axel_Van_Osbourne wrote:
I wouldn't mind a word or two on mine....I have been so buzy fending off crap from the entire fed in the trash talking thread I think I may have gone a little weak...

This is just my opinion, but I felt like you could have talked more about the 80s training montage part of your promo. To me, that kind of funny stuff is what would define Axel Van Osbourne...but you just sort of skimmed over it.

Just my thoughts. Good promo though.

Thanks I was gonna flesh it out as a combo of Rocky 4 and the Karate Kid and I think I night tweak it a bit I mean we have til Sunday right? Thanks for the feedback

Added some choice stuff IMHO -- Take a gander if you can I think its pretty cool


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PostSubject: Re: Promo Feedback Requests   Mon Jan 11, 2010 10:55 pm

The Ares wrote:
To be fair it's mainly me, and if you don't like it you could always back down Very Happy

Also, I will try to feedback who I can, no promises, but I will do what I can in my spare time.


I know I was just funnin w everyone. I actually enjoy our lil back and forth -- it keeps this old man spry
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PostSubject: Re: Promo Feedback Requests   Tue Jan 12, 2010 9:15 am

Gabriel Crow wrote:
I'm not sure if I'm supposed to do this but there was no topic thread for this. I'm requesting feedback on my promo for 10.1.


I loved your promo man -- I dig the dark edge and I am a huge Eric Draven fan and I mark out every time I see your banner. It does alot to further your backstory too which I think is cool
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PostSubject: Re: Promo Feedback Requests   Tue Jan 12, 2010 10:08 am

To sound completely like a jerk, but shouldn't we use the rest of the feedback thread for actually giving feedback? Leave this thread for Requests. If you want to leave feedback for someone create a thread specifically for that.


<---Feedback Nazi.
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PostSubject: Re: Promo Feedback Requests   Tue Jan 12, 2010 12:01 pm

I agree with Clarke. That's why I created the Promo Feedback Channel. This thread is for requests only, not the actual feedback.
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PostSubject: Re: Promo Feedback Requests   Wed Jan 13, 2010 11:36 am

My bad guys I beg off as being the new guy it won't happen again
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PostSubject: Re: Promo Feedback Requests   Wed Jan 13, 2010 11:41 am

It's no worries, this just keeps this less cluttered and easier to get through, that's all.

I myself plan to start a thread for my feedback for every show. That way people will be able to select the show quickly and easily and see their feedback.

This way people will be able to leave comments freely in these topics without having to worry about the comments getting overlooked, or not being able to find their feedback.

That is just my approach to it. But I feel it keeps everything organized.

Also Mad Props to Gabriel for taking the time (I know it doesn't take much, but no one else has) to set up the feedback channels and requests thread.
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PostSubject: Re: Promo Feedback Requests   Wed Jan 13, 2010 10:13 pm

oh why not...I'll take some feedback. And give some in return?
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PostSubject: Re: Promo Feedback Requests   Wed Jan 13, 2010 11:16 pm

I would like some...
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PostSubject: Re: Promo Feedback Requests   Thu Jan 14, 2010 4:19 am

I also would like some on my promo for 10.1

It may be a little short, but it covers all the main points.
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PostSubject: Re: Promo Feedback Requests   Fri Jan 15, 2010 5:58 pm

I totally reworked my promo and would like feedback from those who may have already dropped a lil science on me as to what they think of the changes....I tried to intro the character a bit instead of trashing folks right off the bat....I also set up some things for further promos in the future....I do admit I like the style you guys want better than what I used to do....
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PostSubject: Re: Promo Feedback Requests   Sat Jan 16, 2010 10:06 am

If nobody's busy, would you mind giving me a little feedback on my 10.1 promo please.

I know it's a little all over the place, but that is just the way Christian's mind works (one too many knocks to the head and anti-psychotic drugs from his doctor don't help lol).

Anyway, any feedback welcome, but please nothing too nasty it is only my first promo here in FMW and I'm still not quite used to the way you guys do them.
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PostSubject: Re: Promo Feedback Requests   Sat Jan 16, 2010 1:53 pm

New character direction = new feedback plz? Kthx Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Promo Feedback Requests   Sun Jan 17, 2010 2:01 am

I too would also like some feedback, since I've tried out a different style for this time around.

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PostSubject: Re: Promo Feedback Requests   Sun Jan 17, 2010 9:35 am

Feedback would be greaat this timearound for my return promo. Printing off promos as we speak so I can read them and get a feel for some storylines and characters again.
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PostSubject: Re: Promo Feedback Requests   Sun Jan 17, 2010 9:46 am

Skyler, Ro, Syanide =====> feedback has been updated
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PostSubject: Re: Promo Feedback Requests   Mon Jan 18, 2010 5:27 pm

I'm looking for feedback from as many peoplepl as i can get, so i can see a wider spectrum of opinions. and, ask me personally and i'll feed back you
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PostSubject: Re: Promo Feedback Requests   Fri Feb 05, 2010 11:20 pm

Looking for some feedback on my promo for 10.2
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PostSubject: Re: Promo Feedback Requests   Sat Feb 06, 2010 1:53 pm

I would like some feedback.

I'll return the favor via PM if you do so.
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PostSubject: Re: Promo Feedback Requests   Thu Feb 11, 2010 1:15 pm

I've put up my 10.2 promo, and it's perhaps my best effort ever - the most enjoyable to write, edit, read and even code. Feedback would be exceptional, gents. I'll go ahead and return the favor via pm if I don't put up a thread.
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PostSubject: Re: Promo Feedback Requests   Thu Feb 11, 2010 2:39 pm

I'd like to request feedback. Unfortunately, I can't reciprocate the good deed due to shitty internet connectivity, but it'd still be much appreciated.
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PostSubject: Re: Promo Feedback Requests   Thu Feb 11, 2010 2:47 pm

You and Skyler have been fed.
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PostSubject: Re: Promo Feedback Requests   Sat Feb 13, 2010 4:11 pm

I know it's my "debut" promo and I need to get a handle on my character, and for that I would really appreciate some feedback, I will try to feedback others, but honestly cannot promise.
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PostSubject: Re: Promo Feedback Requests   Sat Feb 13, 2010 4:13 pm

Kinda had to post-and-run last night. Seeing as this is my first promo, any and all feedback you guys could give me would be greatly appreciated!
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PostSubject: Re: Promo Feedback Requests   Sun Feb 14, 2010 1:03 am

Feedback would be appreciated.

The weird part is this promo actually started as a comedy, and I quickly changed my mind.
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